Today you will continue with your story writing. First you will plan point 2, simple words to remind you are adding more danger to the story. Magpie ideas from Ted Hughes chapters 1 and 2, use similes, adjectives and powerful verbs to make your writing exciting.
Remember to send your paragraph to me. I really liked Noah's idea of writing in a different colour to show his edited writing, as well as, showing me how much writing he had done that day. Maybe you could try this too.